Roy Jacobsen, The Unseen (2013)
Translated from the Norwegian by Don Bartlett and Don Shaw (2016)
This novel depicts the Barrøy family, sole inhabitants of a Norwegian island that bears their name, in the early 20th century. Each chapter is a discrete ‘slice of life’, reflecting the largely unchanging nature of island life – there is a sense, at least to begin with, that the story of an individual chapter could have been told at any time. The family move to different rooms in the house depending on the temperature outside; and the weather dictates when they can fish.
However, time catches up with the Barrøys eventually, in more ways than one. Hans, the head of the family, wants to build a quay in order to connect the island to mainland Norway. The modern world encroaches, as does the passing of generations; Hans’ daughter Ingrid has to navigate her way between the old life and the new.
Bartlett’s & Shaw’s translation is subtle and vivid. I particularly like their use of comma splice, which makes description and action bleed together like wet paint. This technique underlines that everything is connected in island life; The Unseen explores what happens when that life is disrupted.
Should this book make the MBIP shortlist?
My honest answer is: I don’t know yet. The Unseen is a good book, but not a shoo-in for me. I’d have to see what more of the longlist is like before I could place Jacobsen’s novel definitively. Having said that, if The Unseen were to be shortlisted, I wouldn’t begrudge it a slot.
27th March 2017 at 7:16 am
Reminds me of reading some of Tove Jansson’s island stories and that same desire that everything stay the same, she was put out when a squirrel arrived from the mainland, who knew that squirrels could launch themselves on a plank of wood and set sail for nearby islands and that its presence would so disrupt the islands sole human occupant.
27th March 2017 at 9:58 pm
Thanks for your comment Claire. I’ve now got an image of squirrels sailing on little rafts, looking for treasure (pieces of nut?) – I love it!
27th March 2017 at 9:51 pm
comma splice isn’t a term I’m familiar with. Can you give me an example?
31st March 2017 at 1:50 pm
Joining sentences with commas rather than semi-colons or using full stops to break sentences up, it’s commonly considered a stylistic error in English though it’s actually very widely used, in French literature it’s commonplace and clearly not an error at all.
You might find this short post interesting: https://tinycamels.wordpress.com/2017/03/12/in-defence-of-the-comma-splice-katie-kitamuras-a-separation/
David’s wet paint usage is a very good example of how it can be used well by causing concepts to overlap and slide into each other.